Ok I'm not a poet by any means, nor do I even like poetry. But I got bored between classes today and was reading military creeds/poem things so I decided to create my own. I play as the "sniper" on my team. Let me know what you think. Don't hold back if you think it is totally gay. lol
I am humble.
I am ruthless.
Your squad will crumble.
To hide is useless.
A master of stealth.
A patient expert.
Internal strength,
to remain covert.
I am the spear.
The ghost you fear.
Time hath sharpen,
my needed skill.
They call me Spartan
Time to kill
I am Spartan, Task Force Spectre sniper
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My personal paintball sniper creed thingy
#2
Posted 02 September 2010 - 12:47 PM
Ok my completely honest opinion is that I think it is slightly funny sounding (I have never been a fan of creeds), but kind of cool also.
#3
Posted 02 September 2010 - 05:12 PM
lol yeah i agree. It sounds kinda cheezy. o well. This just proves my point of not liking poetry and not bein good at it.
#4
Posted 03 September 2010 - 11:56 AM
Don't kill people. You could get in trouble.
Good poem
Good poem
Real agglets don't have sigs :dodgy:
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