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Posted 18 July 2010 - 08:28 PM

You know, a lot of things have been going on lately in my life... my grandma died -- seems like only yesterday that I was driving halfway to the East Coast to make it to the funeral. I've met people, I've said goodbye to people, and now I'm almost done with a really big part of my life in pilot training. Some big changes are coming soon, maybe a move, maybe some new friends, maybe some big life changes for me... anyway I've been thinking a lot, and this morning I sat down in front of the computer and wrote a poem. It's not about me specifically, but.... well, I thought it might be cool to share while I'm all, you know, introspective and everything. Read it if you feel like it, but please, if you do, read the whole thing. Thanks. It's titled "Untitled."





She was the most wonderful woman on earth,
Her eyes perfect smiles, from the day of her birth,
Her teeth, two white fences in perfect align,
Her hair a deep auburn and red like a wine,
Her voice made my ears lift my head to the sky,
Her thoughts made me ponder, her heart made me cry.
Her beauteous face made the midnight ashamed.
My dubious grace made me feel the same way,
but with tears in my eyes and a trembling soul,
I knelt on the grass and I offered my whole.
Such was my anguish -- my legs couldn't stand,
But the goddess of beauty, she did understand,
She squatted beside me, and sang the word "Yes,"
Put her mouth to my lips, and her hands on her dress.
"You've made me so happy," she said with a smile,
"In this romantic park.... with no bathroom for miles...."
"I'm sorry, what?" I asked with marked surprise.
The goddess, still squatting, said "Hey, close your eyes."
I did, and she kissed me again, our eyes closed.
Then a wretched aroma crept into my nose.
Acrid and putrid, and heinously foul,
Then a satisfied sigh -- one that came from her bowel.
"Yeah, that feels good," my queen happily said,
"The next guy to propose here should sure watch his step!"
We hugged and we kissed, and we left with the fog.
But if anyone asks who shat there, 'twas a dog.
Go Yoda -- I didn't order that!
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Posted 18 July 2010 - 08:33 PM

not sure what to say after that ..

"ode to fido" ?
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Posted 18 July 2010 - 08:41 PM

had to read it twice to get it...

funny :dodgy:
Returning hate for hate multiplies hate, adding deeper darkness to a night already devoid of stars. Darkness cannot drive out darkness: only light can do that. Hate cannot drive out hate: only love can do that.” --Martin Luther King Jr.

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Posted 18 July 2010 - 08:47 PM

fido was getting all good but his lady took a nasty dump right on thier date?
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Posted 25 July 2010 - 02:36 PM

It was serious at first, but then the last few lines messed me up...
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Posted 27 July 2010 - 08:20 AM

Do poems and writing interest you. Because most of that poem made me feel like I was reading out of our little poem books back in school.

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It was serious at first, but then the last few lines messed me up...

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Posted 27 July 2010 - 01:25 PM

View Post5N1P3R, on 27 July 2010 - 09:20 AM, said:

Do poems and writing interest you. Because most of that poem made me feel like I was reading out of our little poem books back in school.


Totally. Flying is the backup plan for being a super-famous author and/or a modern Edger Allen Kickass. It's hard to find time to write anything during training though, so for the time being writing takes a back-seat. Fortunately the T-1 I'm flying next *has* a backseat, so maybe I'll get to write some more....
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Posted 27 July 2010 - 04:43 PM

That's really cool dude. And on topic with planes, my grandpa used to be in the air force and has various jets. I think he has a L-29 from...Czech Slovakia and a few others.
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Posted 27 July 2010 - 04:46 PM

pics or shens ... and you gotta be in the pics
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Posted 27 July 2010 - 11:22 PM

For me?
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