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#1 User is offline   edtoro 

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Posted 01 September 2010 - 07:02 PM

Updated once again. I refined most of the bullets to be less of a sworn into duty thing, and its more of a declaration of what we are. Also, took out most off the the I promises, the most annoying thing about my previous attempt.



Our role is not clearly defined,
So our duties will be those of our fallen teammates.
I will not wait to be called upon,
I am a Sabre, I am always by my Team's side,
Ready to engage enemies at a moments notice.
I am a warrior, but I am also a tactician,
Capable of finding the most efficient way to execute our mission.
I promise to guide my Hammer, guard my dagger, lead my Broadsword and be the eyes of my sniper and my Commander's #2 man.
I am the best my team has to offer, yet I am nothing without them.

I am a Sabre, If we can't do it, it doesn't need to be done.


This post has been edited by edtoro: 09 September 2010 - 04:20 PM

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Posted 01 September 2010 - 09:08 PM

pretty good, but the i promise is a bit tacky .... ill try ti figure something out to go in place of that and keep most if not all of your original work.

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Posted 02 September 2010 - 08:34 AM

cools22, on 01 September 2010 - 11:08 PM, said:

pretty good, but the i promise is a bit tacky .... ill try ti figure something out to go in place of that and keep most if not all of your original work.


I agree completely. The i promise thing could change. The last half is pretty cool though.
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Posted 09 September 2010 - 04:21 PM

edtoro, on 01 September 2010 - 10:02 PM, said:

Updated once again. I refined most of the bullets to be less of a sworn into duty thing, and its more of a declaration of what we are. Also, took out most off the the I promises, the most annoying thing about my previous attempt.



Our role is not clearly defined,
So our duties will be those of our fallen teammates.
I will not wait to be called upon,
I am a Sabre, I am always by my Team's side,
Ready to engage enemies at a moments notice.
I am a warrior, but I am also a tactician,
Capable of finding the most efficient way to execute our mission.
I promise to guide my Hammer, guard my dagger, lead my Broadsword and be the eyes of my sniper and my Commander's #2 man.
I am the best my team has to offer, yet I am nothing without them.

I am a Sabre, If we can't do it, it doesn't need to be done.




Updated. Post comments/appraisal.
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Posted 12 September 2010 - 06:24 PM

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Posted 06 May 2012 - 02:54 PM

I like it!
I love my Project Salvo.
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